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Coral Tardis

Hello ! I have made a Coral Tardis 2.0 ( the other version failed) ,  Now have Pillars ( Yeah! )  :D It's the first Map i made , i hope you enjoy the map ! :D

Credits to : Tumblr_Cat   ,  MrPlush.
( Because they helped me and supported me ) . :D

Download the map free : MAP CLOSED. ITS BUGGED
Screenshots : New Coral Tardis BY Whovian4Ever98Alef! Thank You ! wink

Hello !

 

First, nice to see a new builder !

 

Then, let's see your creation. First, it looks rather small to me. The Coral Console Room is meant to be quite high. Yours makes a bit small, and it must have been a problem even during the building. It also looks a bit flat. The floor, for example: the Coral is meant to be on 2 levels at least. The first one is lower, and is the level with the doors. The second one is a bit higher, with the console itself. And as we're talking of the console ... It's a bit basic. The part with the panels is okay, even though it could be more developped, but the Time Rotor is'nt good because ... there isn't one ! The tube just comes in the roof, and that's it. On the original Coral, there's a kind of iron tube, in which the glass tube of the console goes through. I'll just finish with something about the arches, but I think the main problem is space, as I've said earlier. If you want to make an other try (which I could only recommend), you should make it bigger. I think it would really be helpful. And if you can't make good arches, use the ones in the mod ! It's a great model, and it can also give you a base, in a matter of size, to know how tall should be your Coral. 

 

Don't give up ! You've got the shapes, it's something ! Oh, and no need to write your whole message withe caps. 

 

Hope to see new buildings of yours !

 Gonna be honest here, it could use some improvments, for example, the shape is an hectagon-ish form, the console room is big, quite big, and the structure of the walls uses the coral dividers walls, and the coral wall item, without them the walls end up looking kinda crammed and small. The pillars are non-existent, they need to "pop-out" more and the rotor is a lime/yellow-ish colour, other than that MrPlush summed it up nicely

I have made another Tardis Coral Interior , i will put the Pillars ( will be very hard >:) ) and more things in , and other TARDISes :D , but , another time!! ( 11ºDoctor tardis interior : Copper Console , 8ºDoctor Tardis Interior , War Doctor Tardis Interior , Classic Doctor Who Tardises . ) YAY!!! Allons-y!

New Tardis Coral Interior Link : CLOSED
ScreenShots : Coral Tardis Screenshots

Thank you for support and help wink

Hi !

 

Nice to see you didn't give up o/

Could you post screenshots of your new Coral ? It'd be easier for the users. Thanks !

Hi again !

 

It's much better. It's bigger, there's a Time Tube and two levels ... It's not perfect yet, but it starts being good, I think. If you want to imrove it even more, I think you should work on the roof. It's a bit too flat and uniform. And it should also be of a more clear colour. 

 

But you really improved the thing, congratulations ! 

I have made another Tardis Coral Interior , i will put the Pillars ( will be very hard >:) ) and more things in , and other TARDISes :D , but , another time!! ( 11ºDoctor tardis interior : Copper Console , 8ºDoctor Tardis Interior , War Doctor Tardis Interior , Classic Doctor Who Tardises . ) YAY!!! Allons-y!

New Tardis Coral Interior Link : CLOSED
ScreenShots : Coral Tardis Screenshots

Thank you for support and help wink

 sealing is to flat :3

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