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The Tale of Time Immemorial

I've just got an idea for a doctor who spinoff story and I wrote the first chapter, what do you think? (Inspired by The Eleventh Hour)

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"Space-Time Coordinate Programmer failing! Relative Dimensional Stabilisers failing!" The Time Lord is worried as the TARDIS hurtles to Traken. As the Time Lord murmurs in fear and dread, the Tardis landed.

 

As the Time Lord came out the wrecked Tardis, he was met with a little boy and a little girl playing in the courtyard. "Hello children, I'm sorry to interrupt you but could you tell me where I am?" said the Time Lord "Sir, you're in the courtyard of Traken. Who are you, sir?" "I'm... Greydrin, yes! I'm Greydrin" "Sir, you look unwell, should we escort you to the physician?" "No thanks, I'll be fine"... Suddenly, the cloister bell rung "Oh dear, Tardis engines are phasing... Children, I'll jump 5 minutes into the future to stop the engines from phasing..." "Sir, a tree doesn't have engines, it's ridiculous, am I right, Vhioisa?" said the little boy. "A tree, she's no tree! Just wait and see, what's your name child? "I'm called Rowyn, and she's called Vhioisa." "Alright, Rowyn and Vhioisa, I'll be back in five minutes" Then the TARDIS dematerialises and vanishes along with the children's awe.

 

The TARDIS materialises once again in the courtyard. As the Time Lord exited the Tardis, he found that he was surrounded by guards! "Hello... gentlemen... May I ask where are Rowyn and Vhioisa?" One of the guards replied, "Sir Rowyn and Lady Vhioisa are in the courtroom. But why do you wish to see them, and why did you intrude the courtyard?" "Gentlemen... I just left the courtyard for five minutes, if you tell Rowyn and Vhioisa to come out, I'm sure they'll tell you that it's true..." And at this moment, the courtroom doors opened, a couple came out of the courtroom. After noticing the time lord, the woman shouted angrily, "Where were you for the last 36 years?"

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